Their strange task now completed, the crack crew
Of that good ship, the Grokulator, step
Back for a moment to admire the view
Before Yectara calls to them, says "Yep,
That's what was needed. Now we must away."
They gather up their tools. Pepito stands
As stolid as a cow, which, one might say,
Is only natural. Such strange demands
As these are new to one who, before now
Took nothing but drink orders. Now he's made
A crop circle in his own likeness. How
He got here is beyond him. He's been played.
But there's Yectara, standing by the door.
She blows a kiss, and he don't care no more.
I like it! I love the movement and flow of your words.
ReplyDeleteThank you! I think it heightens the utter silliness of the storyline. It's going to get even stupider before it's done. Stupider. More stupid. Whatever; it's 3:40 a.m.!
ReplyDeleteI love this. It's madness, but I loved it.
ReplyDeleteOh, it's not stupid...it's mad fun!
ReplyDeleteLove it!
Silliness and stupidity are not synonymous! Come to think of it, they're almost antonymous!!
ReplyDeleteHooray for interstellar shenanigans!
ReplyDeleteMore stupider = more gooder
You rock
You are mad. Crazy. And I thank the Universe for it. :)
ReplyDeleteI think this is fab, as usual.
A crop circle in his own likeness! ha, love that line. How fun you've made a sonnet!
ReplyDeleteAh, the saga continues. These always bring me a smile.
ReplyDelete~jon
Mwahahahaha. Sounds like just the story for me!!
ReplyDeleteI cannot wait. Made me think of Tom Robbins.
xoxoxox
~*~Rainfairy Felicia~*~