tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-631080913626858673.post5558189988439971691..comments2023-05-26T04:13:55.860-06:00Comments on Suppertime Sonnets: BONUS SONNET: FRIDAY FLASH: The Morning AfterKate Sherrodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08706419613939420574noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-631080913626858673.post-1121399900667363252009-08-24T05:01:36.110-06:002009-08-24T05:01:36.110-06:00Another fan of the 'She's pretty in a post...Another fan of the 'She's pretty in a post-industrial way' line here too.As others have pointed out, the charm of this piece is in its melding of old and new. great to have something so different in style on #fridayflash.dan powellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14131553102349479513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-631080913626858673.post-26835907723424748752009-08-14T22:25:33.546-06:002009-08-14T22:25:33.546-06:00"A lover capable of rust Is not what he'd..."A lover capable of rust Is not what he'd have looked for, though, he thought, She's pretty in a post-industrial way."<br /><br />I have to second Jon's remarks. That line was wonderful. Thanks for sharing this continuation.Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753736809917062955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-631080913626858673.post-36673702667814053212009-08-14T18:42:52.239-06:002009-08-14T18:42:52.239-06:00My favorite line is, "She's pretty in a p...My favorite line is, "She's pretty in a post-industrial way." I really love the sense of whimsy in that. :)<br />~jonJ. M. Strotherhttp://www.jmstrother.com/tiki-view_blog.php?blogId=1noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-631080913626858673.post-9135541341878927302009-08-14T17:47:48.120-06:002009-08-14T17:47:48.120-06:00What amazes me is how you manage to make sci-fi me...What amazes me is how you manage to make sci-fi meld so seamlessly with the sonnet form. It reads so smooth without sounding shoehorned or forced. Really masterful work.Chris Chartrandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09766438158698041660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-631080913626858673.post-3506482656310445382009-08-14T17:33:47.835-06:002009-08-14T17:33:47.835-06:00It's great that you're doing the #fridayfl...It's great that you're doing the #fridayflash! I'm wondering how he's going to fare in this. :)Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-631080913626858673.post-55939788574729693422009-08-14T11:19:51.309-06:002009-08-14T11:19:51.309-06:00Tomara said it all. I have joined her in awe, and ...Tomara said it all. I have joined her in awe, and it's a wonderful place to be. I feel so sorry for Pepito, but can't help thinking he's going to have a great adventure :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-631080913626858673.post-49970332344154086192009-08-14T09:28:07.400-06:002009-08-14T09:28:07.400-06:00That is exactly what I'm going for, Tomara! Yo...That is exactly what I'm going for, Tomara! You've made my day!Kate Sherrodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08706419613939420574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-631080913626858673.post-75179907927432227332009-08-14T08:58:08.243-06:002009-08-14T08:58:08.243-06:00I am in awe. There is no way I could write like th...I am in awe. There is no way I could write like this. It's got such an old world twist to this futuristic tale... I absolutely love it.<br /><br />~2Tomara Armstronghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17185889402088565686noreply@blogger.com