tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-631080913626858673.post1813519189888444353..comments2023-05-26T04:13:55.860-06:00Comments on Suppertime Sonnets: In Which I Feel The Approach Of A New SeasonKate Sherrodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08706419613939420574noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-631080913626858673.post-82419063838427183952009-09-20T22:34:23.020-06:002009-09-20T22:34:23.020-06:00Thanks. I'm never sure how much of that I can ...Thanks. I'm never sure how much of that I can "get away with"; ditto overuse of a particular vowel sound as in the first five lines. My ear still isn't what it should be, I keep suspecting.Kate Sherrodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08706419613939420574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-631080913626858673.post-1607898678110155672009-09-20T22:18:59.700-06:002009-09-20T22:18:59.700-06:00I loved the consonance in this one . . .I loved the consonance in this one . . .Blog of Innocencehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10441920742119200289noreply@blogger.com